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A solid early attempt at writing erotica! 

For those considering downloading this because you've seen screenshots of the more interesting expansions on social media: just know this creator is very much into the non-con side of things and the tone shifts WILDLY back and forth between horny-fun and just dark.

The first transformation sequence involves your character effectively being forced to go into a room with a 'slut' who offers to transform into your wildest desires, a distraction so another character can be kidnapped. If you pick blueberry transformation, suddenly she has zero idea what the kink is and has a terrified reaction to the process. The narration describes the transformation as being "agony" for her until the tone wildly pivots back to horny as she gets into it.

The actual mechanics of the game are interesting, but it suffers from the early VN trap of trying to tell a lot of exposition one short line of dialog at a time. Instead of delivering one paragraph of information you could read in two seconds you have to hammer space bar constantly to speed through all the filler descriptors that repeat information you already know.

Also, I mean this as constructive criticism: You've got way too much going on in the plot early in the game. I get you needed ways to introduce various characters that the player will be able to transform but the plot becomes so ambitious there's a solid ten to fifteen minutes of preamble and not much happening before the first actually erotic scene.

It feels more like a personal writing project that got adapted into a game than an erotic visual novel that was always a visual novel from the start. I highly suggest finding someone you can hand the script to and let them give honest feedback on what text isn't really necessary.

For example: the auction scene operates under the assumption both the player and their character would not immediately understand they are witnessing an auction, so you've got tons of anime-style "what's happening" dialog popups that don't really do anything besides make the scene take longer.

Again: Overall the thing is enjoyable, but even someone who has seen a fair amount of erotic video games and understands what they signed up for is hammering skip-dialog and I'm genuinely not missing any of the plot in doing so.


Thanks for the very descriptive review.

I'll start off by saying that writing is definitely my worst quality. You make good points and I'll try to improve on them as much as I can.

A couple remarks though.

Not sure why "slut" needs to be in parentheses, her character was quite literally built around that term.

Your description of the blueberry transformation to me doesn't really say there's something wrong with it. Just like the other paths, the transformations cause her to be into it. It was also never implied that she knows of any of the given fetishes.

The emphasis for the game, or I guess the thing, has always been visuals & mechanics. Writing has honestly always been secondary to me, as bad as that may sound to you. Objectively speaking, that is what majority of people want.

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i am trying to play this through linux and it keeps black-screening me after the menu and never loads.

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Sorry to hear, what distro are you running and does your computer happen to be relatively old?

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it is an asus chromebook. probably around 6-8 years old.

So the game does load, it's just whenever you try to start a playthrough, it's a black screen? I recommend sending me a message on Discord so it's easier for me to help you.

sorry but i cant use discord as i forgot my login information and cant make a new account under my email. and yes that is the problem the main menu screen doesn't even load properly until i look at the chapters screen

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i tried to run the x86.zip file through the emulator joiplay and it asked for a password. do you know what the password is?

First.. its a huge good work.. im waiting just.. for Renee ... 

I like her height base 1.73M.. but (i think you finished story next chapter) but could you edit that growth of her and really do more animated how she grows grows.. and make size check with barefeet more ? :P 

I if you could do more like that will be hugeeee progress overall its mindblowing keep your good work and maybe tease when you release 1 more chapter :D

Thanks, glad to hear you enjoyed!
Not quite sure what you mean but a character's height is taken without them wearing any type of heels. But I'll try my best to improve on the height growth animations. :)

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Just saying that the installer needing administrator privileges is a bit sussy

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I unfortunately cannot do anything about that, it needs to install components on your system. There is a virus check in the download instructions, and you are free to conduct your own on the MSI file.

Quick question. In "more information" tab it says that there was an update and question is what changes were made because i'm to dumb to see

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I just updated the page, nothing new just yet! :)

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Thanks for answer and good luck with future development

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Great game! Any chances adding more muscle growth content and probably futa? There's a huge community who is into this stuff, I'm sure it will get more people discovering this masterpiece!

Btw, with muscle path for Nylah it felt like there's a place for 1 or even 2 growth stages in between existing ones, for me it felt like she grew too big for one spurt (stage 1 to stage 2).


I'm also so excited to see where this "inducing thoughts" will get. 


Anyways, you did a great job. It is very noticeable how much effort you've put into this game. Please keep going!

Really delighted to hear, thanks for the kind words!

Futa is something that could be integrated somewhere down the line, though probably not any time soon. As for the muscle growth, I'm unfortunately not that much into it, which is why it's a side fetish and has little content at the moment.

I'll definitely make it a slower paced growth when I reuse it. :)

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So after Jade & Renée's paths (When we get to the point on the beach, with your dev note), is that it for this version then or (Being everything I can do)? As to say I'm hooked is an understatement ^^

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> As to say I'm hooked is an understatement

Same here. I was shocked by how well made this game is.

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If you have no more events, then you have reached the end, yes. Really glad that you enjoyed! :)

Dark times when there's no more event ;-;

Is there plans for some audio to this? Even simple stuff, not full blown voice lines, as much as that would be dope. But just something to bring it bit more to life. ^^ Also what's the overall plot here, as I'm still a bit lost on what's happening threw out? ~x~

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Audio is planned and in the works.Also, can't really tell you the plot as that would defeat the purpose a little. :)

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More so I'm just trying to get a better understanding that's all ^^ I'm hooked either way!!!

Can I play the game on joiplay?

Unfortunately no, the Android version is very much planned but I cannot do any work on that just yet.

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Thanks for the reply

So when can we expect an Android version?

the game dont have sound or its just for me?

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It doesn't currently have sound, no.

I'm excited to see just how far the optional hyper content can go as that's not common enough. keep up the good work!

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I'm personally right there with you, very much a fan of hyper things too. Will do! :)

nice game, hope that new updates come fast

Thank you, I hope so too! :)

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What a wild game! I played it at one sitting and honestly I was left wanting more. One thing I have some criticism for is maybe the fact that the sort of 'overworld' map is graphically a bit dull; as it is just the same squares in a grid. Otherwise very fun little visual novel type game (even though I'm not SUPER into the fetishes the game provides). Very fun! :) 

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Thank you so much, delighted to hear!

As for your criticism, I can definitely see what you mean, though I'm a little unsure as to how I could improve on that without changing too much of the system currently.

I think map is fine. Fast travel to places where you've been may make navigation easier tho

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When I downloaded the game, my computer told me that this file (the game) was not trustworthy. Is this normal when I download the game ?

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It is unfortunately normal, yes. There's a virus scan link on the download page, if you want to be absolutely sure, or you can conduct one yourself. :)

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Thank you for your help. That's good to know that.

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Dude this is some fantastic stuff!! Wonderful job, absolutely cannot wait for more updates! From the presentation of the UI and game itself to these wonderful characters and the incredible visuals~ you got me so wrapped up I was so disappointed when I hit the developer note content wall! But in a good way hahaha, so excited for whats to come!

Wow, thank you so much for the very kind review. Really delighted to hear you enjoyed! Working on more!! :)

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cant wait for it to be updated more great work!!

Thanks so much, working on it! :)

Is there anyway to run this game on android or joiplay?

There is no way currently to play on mobile. It is planned eventually though, apologies!

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Awesome game, looking forward to new updates! Follow you on patreon

Thank you so much, appreciate it a lot!

I think I've finished all the current content in 0.2.2. Pretty cool so far!

Curious as to why the different Windows versions are different sizes. (443MB, 417MB, 208MB)

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Thanks, glad to hear you enjoyed!

As for your question, the game runs on something called Edge Webview2, which is the biggest reason for the size difference. In the x64 and x86 versions, it's bundled in which increase the size quite a lot, in the non-fixed version it is not bundled in and instead uses the version which is (by default) installed on your Windows system.

In some cases, using the non-fixed version will causes issues for some users who have an older version of Edge or have outright removed it.

Hope this makes sense!

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Hello 0.2.2 is the latest update.if so, when are you planning to release the next one (thanks in advance)

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I sadly cannot say at the moment, I apologize, but I'm very much working on it!

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Hello 0.2.2 is the latest update?

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Yes, that is the latest version. :)

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is there vore content already as of 0.2.2

There is only one scene at the moment in Nylah's weight gain path.

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for some reason it won't let me speak to the hologram to buy a VIP pass, i spoke to them once but now when i come back there's no dialogue options

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Strange, sorry that happened. Have you tried reloading the game? If that doesn't work, try loading the latest save before that.

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Same thing happened to me, from what I can tell, it's if you choose anything but immediately buying the VIP pass. Correction, it's when you pick the option for picking holo's new name, it won't let you go back to her & actually interact with her again/speak to her again after that option is picked & done with, it seems to soft lock only allowing you to try walk in but her reminding you about the pass even sleeping skipping hours does nothing, & even reloading the game, sadly nothing fixed it part from reloading back a save. Loving the game so far tho none the less

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Thanks for this, I'll look into it!

is there a gallery function?

There's a gallery for animations when you click on a character's name. If you mean for images then no.

will there even be an Android port

There will be, eventually. I unfortunately cannot bring that out as of right now.

what do at the cell after first Nylah encounter?

You should be able to interact with the wall, and then directly after use the bed. If you can't, I recommend reloading the checkpoint that has been automatically saved for you. Hope this helps! :)

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Thanks, reloading worked

Somehow the installer doesn´t work. It only installs 2 folders named: "Microsoft.WebView2.FixedVersionRuntime.115.0.1901.203.x64" and "resources". And there is nowhere a .exe file so I could launch it.

Have you tried reinstalling at all? Does the installer ever mention any kind of error?

I have tried to reinstall ist multiple times. The installer itself mentioned never any kind of error. I also tried to install it in another path, but there are also only these two folders.

Hm, strange, have not heard of this issue before. I assume using Windows search also display nothing when you type in the name? You could perhaps try the x86 version?

Well, i´ve tried everything that could possible help. I also thought, that my windows was broken, so I repaired it. Even a new installation of windows won´t help. So I have absolutely no idea what the problem is. It only installs everytime the two folders, nothing more. The photos or videos which are used in the game are visible to me. So under subfolders like BE or so I can find these pics or vids. There is nowhere any exe or else. I have also downloaded and tried it multiple times. The only thing I remember is, that a few versions ago the program installs perfectly. But now the new versions won´t work.

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Gonna be honest, thought this was gonna be a virus cause of the installer (installers spook me a little). But after 3 virus scans and playing the game for a while, I was spooked for no reason at all. And I'm glad I was spooked for nothing too.


Incredibly well done VN built in a custom(?) engine or upon an already existing one. And it is a very good one too. Lots of various tfs, all with their own animations accompanying them (also quite well done) The models are very good too. A few bugs I've noticed, but they're easily solved by loading to a previous scene and skipping back ahead. (one is when Victoria starts talking into the intercom, she stops talking, it lets you move and you can't progress) AI images aren't too bad either.  I love the inclusion of the stats screen as well as the UI in general. 

As for the story, it seems pretty interesting so far. Can't talk too much about it since I'm just barely past the aforementioned Victoria part. Same goes for the characters as I haven't learned much about them yet. Overall, good shit I approve *thumbs up*

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Thanks so so much for the very kind review, I really appreciate it!!

Unfortunately there's not much I can do about the .msi file, I try to give virus tests beforehand to defuse that as much as possible.

Majority of the game is also custom built, glad to hear you like it! :)

I'm absolutely loving this game so far! will there be any transformations for the MC? mainly of the tg variety? I understand if that's not you're cup of tea but I would love to see it! 

Thanks, really glad you enjoyed! It's planned somewhere down the line, not anytime soon though as I really want to focus on fleshing out the current stories first.

Man, your game is amazing, and just out of curiosity, to what extent will you release the game for free? I don't mind paying, I'll gladly give my money for this gem, and aside from Patreon, can I donate to you another way? like paypal etc

Thanks so much!! New updates will always be free, supporting me on Patreon will just give you access earlier. As for other methods, I also accept payments on Itch (it prompts you when downloading the game). Appreciate it! :)

Say in the future will there be muscle growth choices for the control pannel and in the "mind" growth opitions? also you can only hand out with the girls until they grow once right?

It's a side fetish so it won't be added in most places. I can't promise anything but it'll definitely be used somewhere down the line. Also you're correct, that's their current end. :)

Ah okay, that's a bit of a shame. How much of a side thing? like will it be a spin-off for giantess? (like hyper-blank for the other routes)

A side fetish meaning it will only be used in specific story lines or as a secondary to the main fetishes. Hope that makes sense.

any release date to the next version?

Unfortunately not yet, sorry!
After 0.2, it took me quite a while to fix all the issues so I started late on the new version. I'm very much working on it though!

I can't find the FEMALE MUSCLE FETISH ,how can I find it ?

Make Nylah taller, and you'll find it. :)

why is the game a msi file

Because it needs to install the necessary components to run the game. There's a virustotal link in the download instructions, feel free to conduct your own.

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Will you add Spherical Inflation next? I know it's basically Blueberry Inflation but with normal skin, but will you add it anyways please?

I'll see what I can do, cannot promise anything though. :)

Thank you! I'm looking forward to it!

Will be other fetishes in the future? Also GREAT game! I loved!

Not any time soon, want to flesh it out with the amount of fetishes currently included first. :)

How do I trigger the Vore scene? And thanks for the good game.

It's in Nylah's addictive weight gain path, if you deny her. :)

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I love your game! It's great! Can't wait to see it finished! Would love to see some fart content added if possible. Either way, great stuff and thank you!

This new version you posted today has something new?

I haven't uploaded anything new today. I've just changed the download instructions on the page, maybe that's what notified you?

yea, probably 

Will you be able to choose more than one type of growth for the main girls

They said that eventually probably

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The plan will be to first off flesh out the four paths themselves, then after that it will depend on what I plan to add to each. :)

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Will it be on androi

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